| Reviews for A Beautiful Lie |
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MaryMary123 5/16/13 . chapter 42Good story.. Thank you, |
MaryMary123 5/16/13 . chapter 39sad. well no movie talk right now. |
MaryMary123 5/16/13 . chapter 37Yep you were right. The stress caused her to deliver early. Same thing happened to me with my second baby. She was fine but so much smaller than her brother. My mother was dieing with cancer. |
MaryMary123 5/16/13 . chapter 29how sweet. |
MaryMary123 5/16/13 . chapter 28You may not even read this. I must tell you (just in case you do) you do a great job of writing Timmy. Some writers try to write baby talk. My children nor grandchildren spoke that way after 2. So 3 and 4 year olds making half words is crazy. |
MaryMary123 5/16/13 . chapter 27I keep getting a feeling something will go wrong. |
MaryMary123 5/16/13 . chapter 24Sounds like she did not want to. |
MaryMary123 5/16/13 . chapter 23he is on his way.. |
MaryMary123 5/16/13 . chapter 21THis story has been over for years. So I guess reviewing now is dumb. What I want to say is she should tell Timmy it is a game. Make it a game. He still has to know the people with cameras are not our friends so he is not suckered into on of them by accident. |
MaryMary123 5/16/13 . chapter 20How very sad these people think they own him. That is what is wrong in Hollywierd. Make a movie market it and play it. Stop this drama after hours. |
Sarah Amin 5/13/13 . chapter 7in any other circumstances i would have found a million excuse for her but here there's none .. It's not like she gave him the choice to accept or refuse .. |
Sarah Amin 5/13/13 . chapter 4she has no right to decide for him .. she keeps doing it and wont accept the same from him .. she's selfish .. she did it for herself not him since he's soooo willing to give it up and yet she keeps deciding for him ! |
Aly 5/10/13 . chapter 22 I LOVE your writing. Keep at it. God bless you and have a wonderful day my dear friend. |
LoveRob 5/11/13 . chapter 42Lovely, just lovely. |
Savage Rob 5/10/13 . chapter 42Awe sweet! |