|Reviews for Marshmellow Bites|
| Gravitation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 29
Whoa, maybe Shuichi and Yuki should go and see more romantic tragedy plays more often if that's the result they're gonna get afterwards ;) Shuichi:What are writing down this time?Me:Nothing. Shuichi:Well, come on tonights movie night. Me:What movie are we watching? Shuichi:Samurai X Trust and Betrayel OVA 3. Me:Oh hey I saw that and that's a lot juicier. Shuichi:I know. Me:Well I'm gonna go now so I'll read more later bye. *Exits the room to sit next to Yuki who is sitting next to Shuichi wrapping a blanket over us* Me:Just tell me when you guys start making out I don't want to miss it I will also except sounds of ecstasy. Yuki:*Ruffling my hair*Shut up.
| Gravitation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 28
We just got back from the play and I loved it oh and this chapter too. Shuichi and Yuki looked so cute sitting together. I'll admit I've seen this play before and the tearjerking scene in the play is the death scene and I was sitting on the left side of Yuki and Shuichi at the right and the part where Romeo says his monologue before drinking the poison my lip starts quivering then when Romeo cries while looking over Juilet's "dead" body I start taking shaky breaths then when Romeo drinks the poison kissing Juilet one more time before collapsing to the ground I start crying sniffing as tears pour out of my eyes literally like two tiny water falls and then I stop then when Juilet tries drinking the vile herself I go through same again quivering lips, then when she is kissing Romeo's lips incase there were some poison left but fails and cries out in a choked up voice "Thy lips are warm!" I start taking shaky breaths, then when she stabs herself saying before falling onto Romeo's body "This is thy sheath there rust and let me die" I loose it again and then I leaned against Yuki's shoulder crying which I soon feel embarrassed crying infront Yuki and not infront of Shuichi but that's when Yuki also flings his arm on my shoulder giving me the comfort he just gave Shuichi. But then I guess that's what I like most about going out to see movies or plays with these two, because no matter what we're watching even if what we are seeing has nothing to with love at all I can sense it whenever we're together. Anyway we're in the car on our way home and I just read your chapter and I loved it. Thanks. And happy valentines day to you too. Shuichi:But valentines day is over. Me:Well, they don't know that. Oops.
| Graviation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 27
Awwwww, hey, you know what, sometimes whenever the three of us goes out to eat Shuichi does the same thing fixing his hair like a lady. Shuichi:And what's wrong with that? I can see where women are getting at checking their hair to make sure it looks nice. Me:Anyway, the point is that usually I would then hear Shuichi and Yuki having the same conversation about not being worthy of eachother and I would usually say out loud "Well, I don't think I deserve either of you. Maybe I should pack my stuff and go back home to NY." Then Shuichi would crouch down to where our eyes would meet then he would pull into his arms saying in a reassuring way because when I say things like that Shuichi would usaually take it literally and say something in that tone incase I was in that phase again where I would just suddenly feel unloved, "Don't talk like that angel, me and Yuki love you very,very,very much. And you are home so there'd be no use in going to NY." Then Yuki would place a hand on my shoulder telling me the saaame thing "Yeah kid, having you around hasn't been very bad." A simple "I love you" would be nice but I already knew that they both do so I as usual would suppose it has been said. "Then stop with this you guys feel like you don't deserve eachother because you do just as much as I deserve you two and vice versa." Yuki:Hey brat get off the iPhone and come on we got our seats. Me:I'm coming Yuki, wait up. Yuki & Shuichi:We are! Me:Well, see ya.
| Gravitation Fan 6/2/13 . chapter 26
All I can say is that I love this couple the most infact I think I have time to type the names of all of my favorite couples before we leave. Yuki:*Knocking the door to the study*Hurry up, squirt we're leaving in 10 minutes. Me:Okay. Anyway here's the list:
Inuyasha & Kagome from InuYasha
Light & L from Death Note
Orphen & Cleo from Sorcerous Stabber Orphen
Shuichi Shindou & Eiri Yuki from Gravitation
Well that is all. Shuichi:Come on honey let's go! Yuki:Yeah, hurry the fuck up! Me:Coming! Bye, keep up with the writing you never cease to amaze me. *Taking Shuichi and Yuki's hands as we leave the flat*
| Gravitation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 25
I think it's wonderful.
| Gravitation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 24
Wow unexpected, and Shuichi is right love does rock. 24/7 a day.
| Gravitation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 23
Yep all three of us and I can't wait
| Gravitation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 22
Continuing. I was so close to saying "Fuck this" and then start running but then Shuichi came and said "You can do it sweetie, I know you can." so I swallowed my fear and I gave the band the signal to play the music and as I look at the audience I see Yuki giving me a "I love you" gesture with his hand and so I sang as loud as I could here's it went down "And I've learned we must look inside our hearts to a world full of love like yours like mine like hooooooooooommmmmme!" and everyone cheered and whooed epically Yuki and Shuichi came to me lifted me up and hugged me. That was the best night of my life that is until after I got to the dressing room and barfed in the bucket again. Bye.
| Gravitation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 22
First:I want to say "happy birthday" and the same thing happened to me two weeks ago. Shuichi asked to be the first to sing a song at his concert before he sings, you know like a solo. I was so scared I was actually barfing in the trash can in Shuichi's dressing room. I didn't what song I should sing, I can't really talk in Japanese very well only when I reading something and what's worse is that they had 5,000 people in there that's a lot of fans I couldn't do it. So anyway to make long story short Shuichi came and placed a hand on my shoulders as I was in the dressing room crying on the table then he knelt down and said "It's okay if you're a little nervous, I'm usually nervous too but I'll be right there and if ever need me to join in just give me the signal" which me tugging my ear. So that made me feel good we get ready and we decided to do "Home" sung by Diana Ross. So anyway there we are, Shuichi annoced me and told the guys get ready and I'm just standing there with the microphone looking at the audience and who should I see in the way back is Yuki. I was
| Graviation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 21
I loved when I was reading the last part of the letter I wanted to cry after reading this chapter thanks. Bye.
| Gravitation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 20
Hilarious, but that's not how Shuichi told me but I guess it'll have to do. Bye!
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| Gravitation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 17
I think that was amazing and sweet. I love this couple and I think Yuki proposing to Shuichi not only makes him the happiest man on the planet but it makes me grateful to be alive and I am so glad that in real life there are lovers who don't give a shit what anyone says and that they are willing to take it the next level weather it's going to second base which is having sex or if their gay to make living together official by one proposing to the other. Love is what makes the world go 'round and I'm happy to live in that world where love exists no matter if you're brother and sister or heterosexual or homosexual as long as there is love then nothing else matters. True love conquers all! Shuichi:Very well put. Me:Bye!
| Gravitation fan 6/2/13 . chapter 16
I didn't like I loved it, and that reminds me of the exact same thing happening yesterday, Shuichi had just left for the studio leaving me alone with Yuki as usaul then while Yuki was talking on the phone with his brother Tatsusha something about him asking Yuki what do get for Mr. Sakuma for their 2 month anniversary or something I don't know, anyway I was busy coloring when I saw the box of chocolates sitting on the tv set. Since Yuki was in his study I thought he wouldn't mind so I went and took 3 or 4 and quickly ate them until I had a stomach so I had to drink two glasses of diet Pepsi to make me burp. Then Yuki hung up and walked towards the box of chocolates but noticed some of them were missing but guess what, I guess he probably realized that I had taken some so I hear him walking towards me and I thought he was gonna do his "I'm very angry at you" act but he crouched down to my level because I was sitting on the floor and held the box infront of me offering me another. I asked if it was poison but it wasn't and he gave me one of his warm small smiles and ruffled my hair asking me if I liked chocolate and I said "Yes" then I took a chocolate broke it in half and gave Yuki the bigger half and said "But I like you even more" and I gave him a hug and he hugged me back and that was the second best embrace I ever got from him. Bye!