 lilypromise2u 2009-03-15 . chapter 1Great job with this fanfic! You portrayed Victor very well, and I just overall enjoyed it. (I love that more people are doing Victor stories! Yay, Victor!) |
 Rin-neechan 2008-10-30 . chapter 1I'm going to pull your leg right about now. Alexander Flemming didn't invent penicillin, he discovered in by accident in the sink of his laboratory when the mold had grown on a sample he dumped out. But, then again, where would modern medicine be without penicillin? Good old
R-C9H11N204S. Letting go of your leg now. :D
Knowing as I've danced with many a guys who couldn't dance, and I love dancing, I'm eager to see how your write up Victor's little dance with Leslie. And being as Victor is my fav character in Trauma Center, I'd love to see how his night is concluded. I loved your first chapter, and knowing your writing, I'll love the rest of them. |
 Parsat 2008-10-20 . chapter 1Nice...leave it up to Victor to dress up as the nerdy guy. Very nice work from you.
I totally got the 007-Fleming reference too. |
 TCGeek 2008-10-19 . chapter 1I got SO. EXCITED. when my inbox told me you wrote a new TC story! SO excited! :D And rightly so, as this was fabulous... just the little slice of quick wit and fresh characterization that I've been needing around here for a long long long time. I absolutely love how you wrote Victor - mind battling between a party with actual people, or cleaning his house... I love it.
Even the part with Derek and Angie was cute, and I have to commend you, because even when they're side characters in a story of mine they have to be mauling one another or I'm not happy... haha. You did a great job of keeping the balance, and I especially liked the part where Victor and Derek get to talk. I always saw Derek as being the only person Victor could really stand... :D
Now as for your absence from here, I'll forgive it... for now. Assuming of course you're coming back soon :) Don't forget about us -- your stuff is way too great to go missing from here for too long. And I should know, because I'm STILL reading "Lucky Day". :D
Excellent, as always. Thanks for the much needed homework break, too :) |
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