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Zenia
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
More!!
Raven of Alaska
2008-10-23 . chapter 1
Have Terra come looking for Garfield, come across Raven's place, and find Garfield "cheating" on her. Divorce papers get finalized, and then Raven and Garfield begin dating. A few days/weeks/months/years later, however long you want it to be, Raven and Garfield get married, have kids, and live happily ever after. But don't make Terra a b*h, just have her be really depressed.

Sincerely,

Raven of Alaska
TheMightyErrg
2008-10-22 . chapter 1
This story must end the only way it should. He leaves Terra that b... bad person and Raven and BB get to together. I know she might have some issues on being 'the other woman' but she'll get over it when they realize they're meant for each other.
EmoGrass
2008-10-20 . chapter 1
Maybe Terra could be cheating on him,admit her mistake, can get divorced,get married to their soulmates,blah,blah,blah,and have some fluffy ending or whatever.Or maybe Terra would cling on him like a bloodsucking leech,and and a way to remove 'it' has to be found,thus creating a slightly more interesting story.That's all I can think of now,and I hope that helped,directly or indirectly.Update ASAP!
6StringSamurai13
2008-10-19 . chapter 1
Wow...that was really good. Great job on the imagery and dialog and you really managed to capture the tension between BB and Raven.

I'd suggest an idea if only it wasn't so cliche in my own mind :-D. But...I would say, don't have Terra come off as a **. That's too easy and it'd be overly dramatic. Keep it...civil? Anyway, keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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