Wow. That was very intense. I liked it :D

Hey, that was good.
Can't wait for second chapter.

I actually came for the prospect of NeroxDante, but will have to wait on that...lol Just don't make us wait too long. ;)

Typically speaking I avoid twincest, but there has been at least one story where it worked enough for me to read it. You made it work somehow for me so this makes two...lol So kudos!

You though have a very good talent for writing. The fight scenes, dialogue and the way you put words together works really well. I felt so bad for Dante...lol I liked how he thought about how he would 'take his human heart and embrace it'. Showing the conflict in personalities.

Your wife asked you to write this?! BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That makes me giggle...lol Tell her thank you for giving the idea. I hope you decide to continue it so I can see how you portray Nero and Dante. :)

-Shy

OMG, I really hope you will update soon!!
And yeah, I prefer Nero too, lol...
Excellent work!

I love this chapter! And I will force you do the next chapter... -looks around-

~Kradnohikari