Wonderful. I LOVE Jake. Well, in my mind Christopher Gorham is the most gorgeous male on this planet and in fact I love everything that he's ever done so I might not be quite objective, but... I just love it. Hence I love your story. That's all I wanted to say;)

Love this story.Keep updating it.

Hey, I really like it! I totally wasn't expecting the whole Vanessa thing. That's a great idea for a story! I really like what you have going. It doesn't look like not having a beta would be a problem for you ;) but if you'd like one, I would be more than willing. But it looks good to me.

Can't wait to read more.

Elizabeth