this is halerous

Haha, a fanfiction trapped in a fanfiction. I loved it. The humour got to me and I once hysterically giggled when I read the BXJ. Haha! YOu got Edward PERFECTLY and all the other characters. 5/5

What right you have you to talk to me like that? I HATE you! You're aloser and terrible writer Twilight SUCKS! And I don't need to care about what a stupid black bitch girl say, black people can't write! I am good REAL TALENTED writer and your are terrible writer! Leave me alone and STOP using your other indentities to flame me!

I know you are only one person who flames a me! All the other people LOVES my self inserts and only YOU one person FLAMES my GREAT stories!

HA! Really fun and enjoyable and I LOVED Edward's review! :D

The characters were well-written, so this was very nice to read (I wish I could say that more "fine-sounding way" but it wouldn't probably look too good anyways with my English, so that's all I'm gonna say :D)

What an interesting idea! :D I had really fun reading this :D

And just my personal opinion, because I just, well, normally don't like to read stuff that have too different relationships and events than in the books I really liked this part for some reason ;) : “There’s no Jacob in this because I hate him. I also can’t write werewolves, so there won’t be any werewolves at all. I also hated Breaking Dawn, so it didn’t happen. And Renesmee is just a possibility.” :D

And this made me all "ROFL" too: "Hey peeps loyal reviewers future reviewers I need 20 reveiws per chappie Oh Parings r as following: bellaxjasper edwardxemmete rosaliexoc alicexoc maybe a bit fo bellaxemmet and edwardxrosalie." just so.. :D

Well, ok, I really liked the whole thing, I could list these a lot more :D

haha that was really good. well done :)
and i loved 'edwards review!!' haha

hahaha i love this! its bloody hilerious!
ooh edward should write his own story! :D

I don`t think you should get any bad reviews. It was really original and was really well thought out.

If people don`t like it then they shouldn`t read it...


Awesomje story,

Stefy101

oh god. seriously, they could do more exciting things than that, i bet. but y would they want to? i mean, ff is just so ENTERTAINING. and there are so many stories u could read and never get bored of!

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! i find this extremely entertaining. is edward writing a fanfiction? i think he is. IF he is, there are BOUND to be some interesting things in the second chapter. lol.

LOL! I think I kinda died laughing after reading this. Shows us how messed up the fandom is, with characters saying things they'll positively -never- say (imagine Edward saying f-ck! Scary 0.0). You have a talent for humor, I daresay ;P

And the last line was just... hilarious. So very Alice-like XD.

Keep writing!

- Beth M.

Great job!

What a hilarious story! I actually laughed aloud. I love it. You've highlighted every thing I hate about bad fanfiction, and you have done so in an entertaining way. I like that you kept the characters in character as well. Well done. (However, the past tense of ground is ground.) :)

Hey this was hilarious, I completely agree with you. There are lots of fanfictions in which I would get annoyed just reading the summary ugh that's so frustrating!

Anyway, you did a great job :)

XD


Nice job here. You are excellent at fandom satire. I am starting to get into Twilight but this is great. Nice job here. :D