interesting!
please update more, i can wait for more!

hehe I'm still craving for more.thanks for this chapter and pls. update soon.the few grammatical and/or spelling errors may be avoided or fixed if you let someone proofread your story first before posting that's all XD

XD nice cliffhanger.and nice plot u got here very interesting indeed.thanks for writing this hehe

I really liked this story. I hope that the next case is just as great!

OMG! I just started to read your fanfic. And I HAVE to say that I'm loving it! *-*
I'm looking foward the next chapter! :D
Update ASAP, please!
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i lub this story!! putting on favorites!! PLZ update soon

intresting story! i like it update soon!

yay! I'm happy for the review. My only disappointment is the shortness! Will wait for chapter 5. Have fun!

*waiting for more*

This has a very good start to it! Silly Mayura...got caught in another mystery. Maybe she'll actually see this one through without being knocked out or some such, ne?

*faves*

yah! good chapter *glares* you could have let me read it in school! *grins evily* revenge will have to be good . . . as soon as i have something to take the revenge with lol great chapter cant wait for mroe

I'll keep reviewing as long as you keep updating! XD
Hmm...I LOVE the detail you use even though this chappie was basically just a filler. Still, keep at it! You make the dedicated readers happy! =D

When you already use ..-san, you don't have to put the 'Mr.' word. The '...-san' itself already mean Mr.

instead of using '...' for the talking, I think you should use "..." like other author. '...' is mostly use for the thought

Anyway, hope to see your next chapter soon

Yay! Another chappie! Well, I'd actually be really surprised if Mayura wasn't OOC, but I still liked the way you portrayed her. Keep up the good work!

wow I love it so far. It's like I am reading a mystery novel or something. Lots of detail. Keep up the good work.