Very Nice story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)

There is first. PresleyxNefertina coupling at end. It's cute. Mostly, fics that I see is NefertinaXJa-Kal coupling which it's does not make sense to my opinion. I think they are more like brother and sister or something like that.

I do like that fact Ja-Kal married his wife's reborn soul. That's also cute.

Plus the last sentence was very interesting.

Minus the grammar mistakes and one character's name misspelling, it is decent and interesting fic to read.