haha! clever...very well done! :) i enjoyed it very much.

I LOVE IT:) :)
P.S SMILE!

aww that was soo cute and funny :)

hey, i think this was funny and cute. totally think you would be a great pote someday! i've also been thinking of writing a story for this category, just so there are more than 2, and I have a really great idea,but i'm not saying. idont know if i'll go thru with it though... sorry i'm rambling again. BYE!

OMG that is so funny! I mean SO funny! ok seriously, you should publish a book of poems, it's that good! XD

:] so funny!
(kirsten btw)
x

Ha ha - short and sweet, and absolutely hilarious!

oh. that's short, but I like it this way.. very funny!!

Hahahaha.
Funny.

Haha, funny!

LOVE IT! No one ever thinks of the story unfolding like that.

GREAT CREATIVITY! KEEP IT UP!

~MuseLover1901

:-D :-D :-D :-D
ten of ten plus an extra star :-)

Haha! I LOVE THIS!

totally FUNNY. had me smiling the whole time.

Hehehehe...very funny, and very original. You should try writing more 'alternative fairytales' like this - it was brillinat!