Oh,I really loved this! It was a beautiful combination of romance,sexual tension and humor.
Poor Alex,he really did need a hug!
I was so happy for him that in the end Michael didn't break his heart,and they both got what they wanted.
I like the way you set things up,with Alex not understanding at first what Michael was trying to say,and Michael's awkwardness in trying to explain it."I gave you a crane,"lol!(But that is so what I was thinking when I saw the crane Michael left for Alex "He loves him":) )
I hope you write more of this pairing. They're my OTP on Prison Break.
BTW: You mentioned a challenge/fest-what community did that challenge come from?

I rarely read Prison Break fanfiction - and I saw this fic while looking at your profile to see if you have anymore KakaIru.
And I liked it straight away - I love how you turned Michael's inept social behaviour into something soo cute.
Mahone is spot on - well I think those are his thoughts most of the time - all in all, a very funny man.

Hmm...just don't get me addicted to slash Prison Break fanfiction...I am still to involved with KakaIru

Anyway, good one

Wow! I love it. I love your writing.
I love your characters. Very realistic.

I surprised! Your first?

Wonderful fic. You should write more.

*chanting* more,please...

Thanks.

Aw, that was so cute :D I love Mike/Mahone fics and oneshots, and yours is really well written! Great job!