Brilliant, loving it! It's difficult to write a story with this pairing because there isn't much you can expand from. Even though, I think you're doing a really good job! Really looking forward to this. :)

I wanted to let you know that I've been reading this story for 2 hours straight and the tension is amazing and passionate and your chapter titles are friggin awesome and you must continue for the sake of me. Thank you, that will be all.

*bows before queen Bialy*

I really hope you will continue this...

AH, I love this fic, have been following it forever, and am very glad I can how join FF to add it to my favorites. It's really excellent, please keep working on it at some point! 3

This is the fic that got me addicted to Mello/Halle- I never even thought about it much before reading this. You illustrate their relationship so well that I can't not like it. And a bit of smut added to a greatly written fanfic always makes me happy.

That was absolutely amazing!1!

It was absolutely incredible and I really really really REALLY want you to finish this. Please? Pretty please with sugar on top?

Wow, I'm really liking this. I love your writing style and the way you portray the characters. Everything is very cleverly written. I feel bad for Matt and everyone really. Please update soon!

oh my god, this is amazing! this is my favourite couple in deathnote and you did a great job writing this! loved it :D

Seriously? Another one? Damn, but no one should be allowed to be this good. :D You, my dear, are simply amazing. And whoever told you you can't do plot is a nutter, because you've had me hooked with every darn thing you've written. And did I mention that I love HallexMello? Because I do. A lot. Especially the way you write it. Woot! I sound like a Major Fangirl. But that's okay because I've already read half of your fics and squeed over all of 'em, which pretty much puts me over the edge on the whole stalker thing. However, art is art, and your work is certainly art. :)

I am very much looking forward to the continuation of this fic. And if you don't update this soon, I will be forced to... carry out this threat! Uh, yeah!

M'kay, I'm gonna start rambling again if I don't end this review soon. But really, this is very much win. :3

-Eggy

I want to see that HalleXMatt oneshot! Great stoy, and yu need to update!

wow. that was really something... i loved it. are you going to update anytime soon?

awesome.. there is just no other word for it.. awesome..

Your fic's so good. I love your writing style and I love the way you 'made' Matt, seriously. Well done, I'm waiting for the next chapter ;)

;_; Update...Please..

I just love this story, so much. So, so much.

Great fic! I can't wait for the next update.