OMG! that story was totally amazing! i really connec ted with the emotion that Susan and Edmund felt towards each other. if this kind of thing happened in the actual Narnia story, Susan's fate really would've been changed.

Loved it!

AWESOME! Its so nice and refreshing to know Susan turns out okay. I love the way you word things. Two thumbs WAY UP! Keep the stories coming!!

i thought that this story was incredibly amazing! loved it! keep up the good work!

Beautiful, really touching. Really, very well written.

This was a very good story. I liked your characterization of Susan as she was and how she became and how she returned to herself. One (long)thought though- in your author's note you mentioned that you thought Susan didn't deserve the end she recieved, but the reason she didn't return to Narnia is that she did not die in the train crash (granted, she didn't go to the train station because she lost her faith in Narnia, but you get my point (I hope)). In one letter C.S. Lewis wrote in reply to a little boy who wrote to him in remorse of Susan's fate stated that Susan might yet get to back Narnia, for once a King or Queen of Narnia, always a King or Queen. I think that Susan did return to Narnia when she died, for she was always a Queen of Narnia, even when she denyed it.

So sweet, I absolutley LOVED this. Very well put together :D

Beautiful. Much better than I could have done. Though I don't think the ending of the Last Battle had anything to do with punishing Susan for her own choices.

i like it. i did find the ending rather strange! would be good to read your version of the events after the crash to see how it changes with susan there.

Loved it :) please write the reunion with the rest of the family and entry into aslans country please??

WOW! This is a GREAT fic! I LOVE how Susan found her faith once more!
YEAH! Susan!
YEAH! ASLAN!
YEAH! EDMUND!
POST MORE ASAP!
Love ya,
Sam

I love love love this story! it's one of the best narnia fics ever. Very well written. Why in god's name don't you have any other reviews yet? This story ought to have more attention. it's so good. I loved it so much that it's hard to pin point what I loved the best. no, actally it's not, I loved the end. I've gotten so used to fics where Susan just watches one of her siblings leave that when she screamed for Edmund to wait, I just wanted to scream, "Yes!" It was wonderful. This going right on my favorites!