UPDATE SOON
i love it a lot :D except d tanya thing

freaking love it!

I really like your story and I sincerely hope you will finish it.

wow his mother! WOW how cruel i hope it all works out in the end but just to be sure you HAVE to write the rest of the story for me. this is a great idea and this is the first story ive read with this tory line. Luv it so far so please continue.
Pieceofcake13

I love this story I just wish you would update! I am dying of nit knowing.

Hey,
I love your story, the plot is amazing, I love Edward and I can't wait to read more. I just have one question, you know how you always use two words instead of one...like 'do not' instead of don't. I think by doing that you take away from your amazing story. Most people don't talk like that in real life so writing like that makes the story seem stiff. Upright. If you want to loosen it up a little and make the characters come alive even more use apostrophes.
thanks, I'm not trying to be mean, just offering some constructive criticism.
-heavenforbid

Okay, I've been thinking...how did evil Elizabeth buy off Lauren Mallory? You will come back to this story, right?

Ew...Elizabeth is evil. Glad Bella ran, in one way. You made it completely understandable that she left "for" Edward. Nice twist.

Good to read about the Clearwaters again. Looking forward to the Blacks being added in.

Great job!

Thanks for switching POVs. I find it very helpful. Okay, so did Edward's mom run Bella off? And because I'm obsessive, to which parent is Carlisle related? And Tanya is coming. Whoa. Should be interesting...

I enjoy reading whatever you write. You have a pleasant writing style. And of course, with the cliffhanger, I'm hooked. Nice job!

Great story, how about an update!

Yes loved it please write more please please please and no the author notes are fine just shorten them a bit and it would all be OK :)

I love your story so much already! It has already brought tears. I can't wait to see what happens with Edward, Bella, and Daniel. Please, please continue soon! =]

Um...its OKAY.

WOW.JUST WOW.