This was rele good! I luv buffy the vampire slayer and if im not mistaken this was a buffyxSpike? I could be wrong but anyway this as awesome and you should continue with this one!

very well written. you've gotten Spike's style of speaking down)

This was lyrical and lovely. You write beautifully I can't wait to read your other stories! And I'm glad you focus on B/S they are my favorite relationship)

ah ha! So this is where you’re hiding, lol, proving that you can turn your skilled writer’s hand to whatever you choose. As always, your stories have that certain, indefinable X factor which makes them compulsive reading, well done Becky. It’s great to see you’re back _

this is lovely. Thanks.