wow. that was so sweet.
by the way, how does this fit into the Star Jar story? or is this just a story using the same characters,
because I don't remember if Ayumi played tennis or not in Star Jar.
Well, anyway. This was an amazing story

Aw... At the end is so cute! I love it. T^T NU!~ Its the ending. T^T Y? Y? T^T Oh wells... It's really awesome! Loved the whole part. Even the fluffiness. ;P

OMG! MOre pockys 4 u! *Takes the whole year supplies of pockys and dunps it on RandomAznNoobieNeenjazoncrack.* Hope u like the treats!

(Ha! I spelled ur name right! xD Yesh so proud!) *Background: U just copy and paste **!* Who said dat!

Aw... well Oh yesh before i forget... I made a new Stroy ^^ Ploz read it. Oh and can ya give meh advice for, everything in mi story. Thx. and Enjoy? Oo xD

Hi! I LOVE your FanFic's, so please keep writing! Also, please try to update Star Jar. Cheers!

wow. beautiful!


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I love it. though i wish it had a happier ending, i love how it makes you think and reevaluate your own life. Very nice.


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Aw!! It's so sad :'(
When Ayumi has to leave Ryoma for art school :'(
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE THIS STORY!

Aw this chap was so cute at the end :3 When Ryoma just wanted to see Ayumi :3

OMG!~ Its so gud.~ Love every part of it.~ 100 Pockies 4 u!~ Can't wait 4 the next chappy ^^

OMG!~ Its so gud.~ Love every part of it.~ 100 Pockies 4 u!~ Can't wait 4 the next chappy ^^

really great job with how you describe the connection and feelins of the characters. The way you used paint to describe it was amazing

kur-chan

OMG! T^T So much happy/sad memories! TT^TT I hope it gets better soon!~ Anyways Its 2 gud xD I want 2 know more *Sparkling eyes* Oh yea! Here is 100 pack of pockies! ;] ENJOY! U deverse it! *Thumps up* ;P

Oh! Love this! XD It's out yeay~ :D

Good story! I like how you used watercolor to describe people and feelings. You also portrayed Echizen's rudeness and arrogance well.

What was Ayumi ready for at the end?