You seem to be taking things too fast... and the classic "OMG HIGHSCHOOL!" is not endearing. Try to pull away from the loads impending highschool drama, and focus more on... well, a more innovative, interesting story.

will he find out herbies real and his cousins not crazy in the next chapter ? i hope so !

hope to see more of this soon, I really like to see the return of Gizelle. the turbo was an interesting touch!

great idea.. picking up from Maggie in Herbie Reloaded.. you've come up with some pretty good characters.. hope you finish this..

oh please finish

XD nice. I love Herbie's playfulness. he is so cute!

Wow nice stor. And her I thought that there was not going to to some Herbie stories on this web page. Keep going because I really loved what i have seen so far. Especially since I'm a big fan of Herbie and Giselle.

Update soon its really good!

Katie, you're such a b*.

A great continuation. I look forward to seeing wha else will happen later on. Keep up the good work.

Good story. Please update.

I thought Giselle was a pink car. Isn't she from 'Herbie Goes to Monte Carlo'?

A brilliant start to this Herbie fic. I was glad to see you started a sub-heading for the Herbie series. I look forward to seeing more. Keep up the good work.