Great fic there! You got the characters, the wacky plots, the whole style of the show! Sadly this is way too short for my taste. Please continue this! Unless we get a movie anytime soon, this is the best Arrested Development we are going to have until then. Great Job!

Very nice fic, you definitely caught the whole style of the show from the narrative comments, characterizations, and everything going to hell very fast. It's too bad that you find this complete, I only think it would be half an episode. The world definitely needs more Arrested Development. I wish you'd write more.

you write the arrested development cast so well! GREAT JOB.

Perfect.

This story was great. I do hope you continue it soon!!

Oh God this read just like an episode.

Terrific!

Good restoration of Arrested Development atmosphere. Even though it's a bit confusing being in written form, but it could be a plot for a great episode on TV.

Ah, this was excellent. You were able to capture a little bit of the humor. Great job.

I just re-watched the episode of Arrested Development when Lindsey wants to open the beads store, and GOB keeps making bees references!! XD So I died laughing when I read that reference.

Otherwise, good job! :) Buster and GOB are 100% in character, and everyone else sounds good too!

I love this story. Please update soon! =D

youve captured the charaters perfectly, this is the closest thing to the show ive ever seen

fantastic *five thumbs up*

Possibly the most brilliant thing I have read for a very long time. :)