Oh, my sweet baby Jesus...this is brilliant! I laughed SO hard! I kept picturing Michael's expressions, and the way they would deliver these words. Hilarious!

This was hilarious! Everyone was very in character and I loved the interactions XD This is definitely going into my favorites!

this. story. i cant even. jkjhvjisdgbmbxd. perfect, reads just like an episode. thank you for writing this.

LOL! This is hilarious. :D

Genuinely funny, in a way that most fanfics fail to capture. Definitely worth continuing.

Great story! Very funny can't wait for the next chapter.

Ahah! This was SO great - so in character and well done. I loved it. You captured all their voices really well - Tobias with his accidental super-awkward double talk, George Michael's stuttery manner, Maeby's blunt attitude - everything, so good! :D

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Great fic there! You got the characters, the wacky plots, the whole style of the show! Sadly this is way too short for my taste. Please continue this! Unless we get a movie anytime soon, this is the best Arrested Development we are going to have until then. Great Job!

Very nice fic, you definitely caught the whole style of the show from the narrative comments, characterizations, and everything going to hell very fast. It's too bad that you find this complete, I only think it would be half an episode. The world definitely needs more Arrested Development. I wish you'd write more.

you write the arrested development cast so well! GREAT JOB.

Perfect.

This story was great. I do hope you continue it soon!

Oh God this read just like an episode.

Terrific!

Good restoration of Arrested Development atmosphere. Even though it's a bit confusing being in written form, but it could be a plot for a great episode on TV.

Ah, this was excellent. You were able to capture a little bit of the humor. Great job.