I love this story! It's really well written and story behind it is so sad! Maybe you should write a prequel that explains why Arthur is dying...? Anyway, well done! :D x

Lovely story and very moving but only one thing I would say. If this is Merlin's thought's he wouldn't compare it to a photograph as they hadn't been invented yet. Comparing it to a tree or a blossom ud would fit better.

Oh my gosh, I was completely not expecting that! It was all nice and describing and then suddenly with the death. I was totally caught by surprise! I had tears in my eyes!

That'll teach me to read the category first :D

It was really fantastic though!

Gah no! You've killed Arthur!

Love the way you've done it though, looking over each of the details before he finally goes, slowly changing from bemusement to sadness.

*passes a cookie* :)