Absolutely brilliant!! It was like seeing it thro jack's eyes, i loved it from begining to end.
You should send this to the writers as a story idea if they bring it back. I can't beleive this didn't get first place...it was amazing. I can't wait to go and read more of your stories :D

Whoa! I have been so busy with my fictions, I never had time to read others! But I am glad I took an off day today...this piece was brilliant.
If I could write half of what you have presented here, I would feel I have achieved something!
I love Tru/Jack pairings, like I said before! And I loved your story...you ought to have got the first place...honestly!
Keep writing!

omg, i can really, honestly say it rocks. why the hell did you not win first place?

All I can say right now is Wow, never read a piece which just completely makes you feel exactly what a character feels, this is great cherrygurl.

right on that was good love these two
maria