   Princess JasminKS 9/23/11 . chapter 2nawww! cute story |
| Kendall'sWorldwideGirl 12/29/09 . chapter 2 I loved it but I would like to have known what was wrong with pan why she fainted in the sky ? lol |
| Jrik23 5/3/09 . chapter 2 Good story I like the way they get together. |
| Ursula 4/16/07 . chapter 2 Well from a wannabe writer's standpoint i can happily state that this is probably one of the best finished fanfics i have ever read! Keep up the good job and thanks for being a fan of dbz :D I would also like to comment that maybe the story is a little slow paced and that maybe the scene of shopping with Miracle could be diminished. Very welldone openning though. |
| mysterygal02 5/28/06 . chapter 2 Nice! |
| NOIP 4/2/06 . chapter 2 I LOVED IT!
IT WAS THE BEST STORY OF BRA/GOTEN EVA!
UR A GREAT ARTHOR!
_ WRITE ON! |
| aki's love 5/15/05 . chapter 2 omg, that was SO sweet. Im so happy! great story |
| noy 11/24/02 . chapter 1 LOVE it! Pan is pregnant! bra *sign* |
| Gogeta2 9/29/02 . chapter 2 Excellent |
| MS 7/17/02 . chapter 2 I love the way you go into detail. Most people just leave it there to write itself on our imaginations but you continue satisfying our curiosity. I'm glad I found this. You're a great writer of fan fiction Moon Star, never stop.
MS Absolutely Scandalous |
| MS 7/17/02 . chapter 1 God, I can't believe that I've never read this story before. I love it, I simply love it Moon Star. I can't help but think of where did this plot come from. Anyways, really great chapter and a good imagination.
MS great G/B plot |
| Lora Helen 6/2/02 . chapter 2 That was such a sweet story could u tell me if u write any more |
| queen-videl 4/11/02 . chapter 2 LOVED IT,SHORT AND SWEET |
| Laya46 4/1/02 . chapter 2 Beautiful. I loved it! |
| Ruler Of the Universe1 3/8/02 . chapter 1 Man you write good storys now thats a talent |
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