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midnightwaters
2009-06-24 . chapter 4
I love all of your drabbles so far, especially the last one. Are you going to be continuing this anytime soon?
Nadia
2008-11-25 . chapter 4
LOVE, LOVE, LOVE, LOVE IT!1
Fenrir666
2008-11-03 . chapter 4
Very good. Believable, interesting, I liked Derek's reaction, and John's last line was pretty funny, in a dark sort of way. Very good.

Au Revoir,

Fenrir6
Fenrir666
2008-11-03 . chapter 3
This was good. I liked John's reaction. Good job.
Alana84
2008-10-31 . chapter 4
Awesome chapter, I really liked it! It was longer too, yay!

The interaction between John and Derek was great as always, but I've to agree with Metroid13 a little on that; both John and Derek were a little OOC, John wasn't so nice and well Derek was way too feeble and whatnot!

But given the circumstances, I think it was pretty normal, so never mind, lol!

Can't wait to read more, so please update soon...
blackiebrens
2008-10-28 . chapter 4
lovely :) do write more...
Metroid13
2008-10-28 . chapter 4
John was nastier than usual (enough so that it didn't quite ring true for me in any way, shape, or form) and Derek's lack of vehemence (and, to put it bluntly, personality) was borderline embarrassing.

The writing was pretty good, at least. I don't find the prospect of a Derek/Sarah relationship beyond anything platonic to be quite appealing, so maybe that feeling is coloring this review a bit. To make things more clear: Writing was competent as usual, John was douchier than usual, and Derek felt emasculated. That oughta do it.
Tearlit
2008-10-28 . chapter 4
Haha, your A/N is great. Warning - I'm reviewing as I read.

The bluntness of the Reese men is a nice touch.

because what Derek could gather from Sarah was subtle hints and whispers and little white lies that were probably blacker than any night he'd ever seen. - i like this line a lot.

O I like how John gives Derek a warning.

"How do you feel about--" Derek started, but John was already way ahead.

"About you banging my mom?"

"And she says I'm blunt," Derek muttered. "But yeah, me and your mom." - *rolls around cackling*

"And I think that none of that matters if you make her happy for even one minute." - Aw.

"But if you make her cry for even one second, I'm going to blow the shit out of you and bury what little pieces are left in the backyard." - I like this because John's all protective of Sarah...but the phrase "blow the shit out of you" sounds wierd for some reason. And gives me odd mental images.

This one was pretty good. I like seeing scenes with Derek and John.
Alana84
2008-10-25 . chapter 3
Wow, another drabble series, which I really liked!

Chapter 1 was beautiful and sad! I did too, wonder how Cameron lost her life and was Sarah still alive and what about Derek?!

Chapter 2 was pretty great as well, it was sweet, (mostly towards the end) I liked the perspective and the very well attempted smut, lol! You did very good!

Chapter 3 was a bit darker, which I really liked! The interaction between all of the characters in these chapters were great as always!

Will be anxiously awaiting more! So please write soon...
Serendipity545
2008-10-21 . chapter 3
Shivers.

Lots of up my neck, hair on end shivers.

Nothing more I can really say, sorry. :(
Serendipity545
2008-10-21 . chapter 2
For a second, I though that it was two seperate drabbles, but I like how you gave us an insight into Derek and whatshername.

Very beautiful imagery.
Serendipity545
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
I'm glad I get to catch you at the beginning this time. :)

Very nice reflective peice, and it makes me wonder how Cam died.
lacking a better name
2008-10-21 . chapter 3
I like this one.
lacking a better name
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
I love this. you couls so have put this with 120 seconds,
Metroid13
2008-10-21 . chapter 2
Reviewing Willows: if I'm lucky I'll be the first reviewer of your oncoming six thousand.

I liked it. A lot. The emphasis on Kyle is something I haven't seen you do and you do it well with John's feelings about it, Sarah's, etc. It's obvious that Cameron is somehow dead and gone by this point, which is curious and oddly tragic while reading it, albeit not very well explored. The line at the end from John was excellent.
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