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Pointless.Love 9/6/10 . chapter 13
Liked it It's realistic, except for one thing. It's Sam Richards and Max Miller, I'm sure someone has told you, but in case you were making more LWD stories.

Anyway, the story had humour, some gasp worty moments and overall a nice, not to dramatic Dasey fic)
Dark-Supernatural-Angel 4/17/10 . chapter 13
Great epilogue. I like how you ended the story but I think the epilogue should of had more Dasey present (with dialogue or thoughts of some sort).

Great idea. Turned out Vicki wasn't that evil after all.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel 4/17/10 . chapter 12
That was fun.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel 4/17/10 . chapter 9
Aww!

I hope Vicki doesn't do anything to ruin the Dasey sweetness
Dark-Supernatural-Angel 4/17/10 . chapter 8
Awesome way to end that chapter D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel 4/17/10 . chapter 7
Awesome! Progress and it's only been what a day or two with Vicki.

I like it!
Dark-Supernatural-Angel 4/17/10 . chapter 5
Liking this more and more!

The whole bit of them looking like a family...aww!
Dark-Supernatural-Angel 4/17/10 . chapter 4
I like all the kids looking like a family D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel 4/17/10 . chapter 3
Oh Vicki's little confession fit perfectly D

The little 'Dasey' moment when Vicki arrived was so cute in Derek's POV D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel 4/17/10 . chapter 2
Prepping 6am, wow. Should Casey have been quizzed on Derek?
Dark-Supernatural-Angel 4/17/10 . chapter 1
Oh wow, that is definitely going to be an interesting predicament for those two.
LeanneDaseyLover 11/17/09 . chapter 13
I loved it! Great job! The entire thing was sweet and funny.
ImOnlyYourKitten 10/20/09 . chapter 1
i like it so far! cant wait to finish reading the story)
countingcolors 8/18/09 . chapter 13
i read the entire story today and I have to say I love it. everyone was really in character and i loved the ending going to read more stories of yours now)
BlessyJahne 8/7/09 . chapter 13
Fantastic! I love every single bit of it! great job
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