Uh,oh things do NOT look good.

Nice line with Rivers.

A little confused still about the mission. Okay so the Russians are good with killing Hawke's friends and family, but then he already knew that, but how does that apply to everyone there being killed?

Good line about Cait supporting String's decision just not wanting him signing up for a suicide mission.

Watch the typos.

Keep your friends close, and your enemies closer, huh?

Well done fight scene. Nice touch with the missile. Glad Dante calmed down, would've been a little tough for Hawke to be fighting on two fronts.

The juggling never ends with poor Hawke does it? Have a feeling this is going to get more difficult before it gets better.

Nice scene, well done.

Interesting beginning. One comment though, and it may have just been me, the bit in the first paragraph where both kids are home with parents sick, kept trying to figure out how Chance and Le were home with the parents as String was at the hanger. A little confusing, other than that good start.

Sad about Dante. Perhaps Renae will turn up again. Nice story!

It's getting very interesting. Very interesting indeed. I love the name Dante Rosetti. It's not often you hear a woman named Dante.

uh oh? what has she done? hopefully, the whole gang will thwart the efforts of the bad guys. good writing. suspenseful.

Well, she's demanding isn't she and all he was trying to do was help.
I love the title. It's very dramatic.

Wonder who she is...hm? Let the intrigue and mystery start.