Wow!
So cool!
U should upload this AND Turbulence?
Plz?
I did what u wanted and I'm beginning to make longer chapters, starting with Senior Class of 2009, if anyone is going to reveiw on that story their will be loads of longer chapters! And I'm writing Raly: The Good Part of Meddling right now! it will be done by tomorrow!

Original.
I love it.

That's one very original tone of voice for Miss Teslow. "Ruined" looks interesting from the very start. Plenty of action in the start, the story moves from the beginning and keeps our attention -- mostly through shock value over the alteration in Keely's personality. We haven't seen such an evolution in her character since the day Algebra-Challenged met Future Boy.

That's quite the bold first chapter you've offered. Looking forward to find out what you have planned next.

Best
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