I like how you manage to put Tim into a typical teenager type setting. That was well written.

Wow. Interesting piece you have here and I think very insightful into Tim's life. My favorite part had to be the end, when their eating and Bruce tells Tim that he's always there for him. And then the Batsignal shows up. That's pretty much the story of Timmy's life right there. I don't know if you meant for it to be symbolic or anything, but that's what I got from it.

Great job. You did a good job with the beginning and starting out with just dialogue and even then, descriptions were minimal. This story carried itself well with the dialogue. Nice piece. Thanks so much for sharing!