I really like this. This is well put together and the complexity of the relationships is great. This is a really impressive piece of work.

Aaah, goodie. I had to check this website to make sure I wasn't supposed to read Chronicles before this.

Anyway... A few days ago I was bored, and out of sheer boredom I went to the hideaway, as always, and finally decided to click 'House of Vegeta'.

I read one or two chapters, and because I still didn't find anything else to do, I read more.

And more.

And more.

I'm still reading.

Believe it or not, at a certain moment I had a total of ten chapters open because the hideaway kept giving me problems, and I wanted to secure my reading before it would give me problems again.

I know, this has nothing to do with your story itself, but I felt like you had to know. I'm addicted. Everything I dislike in fanfics, like large amounts of OCs, certain types of incest and a lack or Turles is in here, yet I MUST READ IT.

... It's GOOD.

xD
I'll go back to reading now, my sincerest apologies for rambling in this review.

Good night!

I love your story and I read it on various other site.

You are the best DBZ writer bar none

Just wanted to review here as well since you don't have more review

I like the way you create entire world around the saiyan.

I love the way you create the saiyan

Just wanted you to known that you have real talent.

Bey!

nice

I read this entire series on saiyanhideaway and I read your other stories too. I think the OCs are well done, and the story was very heartwarming and entertaining. These are some of the best Dragonball Z fanfictions I have ever read. Your stories are very good and I think people are sleeping on them, at least on this website. Please continue to write good stories!_

i love your story but the last chapter threw me way off. did i miss somthing? can you explain it to me? lol i feel dumb for asking but i really wanna know haha my e-mail is . Thank You! CoLLiSiOn

Woohoo! I really love it! :D I already read a few chapters of this story on another site, but you posted a lot moer here! great! But... when did Kakarot become pregnant? I missed something i guess, oh well :P

I had another question: I found your Monkey Moon series also on another site, the saiyanhideaway. I really loved that site, but now I can't get to it anymore because the "bandwidth limit exceeded", do you know what that means? and can i ever get on the site again? :D
well, keep it going, love your stories!