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BlackRose96
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
awh. i liked it =)
i think you should make a sequal where he does actually meet up with her and he gets his revenge on Vlad-maybe even just him letting Vlad know that he truly isn't worth the dirt he walks on =)
maybe have Kevin save his life or something, just to rub it in his face =p
that'd be a good story lol
jxr1
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
That was so sweet and sad! Poor Kevin! You really did well with the angsty stuff. 2 thumbs up for this story. :)
kYLE EVAN SERANDON
2009-02-01 . chapter 1
THIS STORY WAS SIMPLY HEARTRENDING. I HAVE ALWAYS CARRIED A DEEP AND SAD SYMPATHY FOR THE POOR LITTLE UNLOVED GOTHCHILED KEVIN. IT WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN AND TOUCHINGLY MOVING MY DEAR. I ALWAYS IDENTIFIE WITH DARK CHARACTERS,DESHWITAT FROM REBIRTH.OROCHIMARU.THE CHIMERAS FROM FULLMETAL ALCHEMIST AND MA PETITE NOIR FLEUR KEVIN. I UTTERLY SO LOATHE BEN 10 ITS SIMPLY ALL ABOUT KEVIN. IF HE WERE A REAL CHILD I WOULD HAVE ADOPTED HIM AND LOVED HIM AS MY OWN. I KNOW HOW IT FEELS TO BE ABANDONED BY A MOTHER. SADLY THOUGH I HAVE NOT SEEN NOR HEARD FROM MINE FOR NEARLY A DECADE. THAT IS WHY YOUR STORY TOUCHED MY BLACKENED LOCKED HEART. YOU ARE A GREAT AND BLOSSOMING TALENT MA CHERE. IF I MAYBE SO BOLD ASTO MAKE A REQUEST COULD YOU PLEASE DO A EQUALLY HEART BREAKING TALE OF FORGIVNESS BETWEEN KEVIN 110 AND HIS SON? I DO HOPE YOU WILL GRANT ME THIS FAVOR. I ALSO HOPE MAYBE YOU WILL VISIT ME ON MYSPACE. SIMPLY LOOK FOR KYLE EVAN SERANDON. UNTIL THEN FAREWELL FROM THE LONELY GOTH, KYLE
SP's The Best
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
Wow...just WOAH. Your story was well-woven, didn't NEARLY get as many reviews as it should have, and it just made me tear! The tears eventually came, and I told myself I really wouldn't cry, but the part where Kevin speaks to his mother for the first time in so many years, and the fact that he STILL loves her, even though she abandoned him so cruelly that fateful day..made me crack! I honestly think you need to create something that extends the plotline of this story, because it was ingeniously written, and this was a great interpretation of Kevin's life(he was so creepily in character!).
WiTHxLOVEx3
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
Thank you. Thank you, for writing this.
It made my day, heck it made me cry!
It's so well written!
Twilight Phantom Dragon
2008-11-26 . chapter 1
Another excellent fic! It provided a very nice backstory for Kevin. I had tears in my eyes for most of the fic. I liked watching Kevin grow through the various stages in his life. Like your other fics, this one earns two-thumbs up!
shylohjaye
2008-11-09 . chapter 1
I'm in tears right now. This is probably the most beautiful Kevin Levin I've ever read!
Great job!
DizzyTech
2008-10-25 . chapter 1
Fantastic back story. Supremely awesome.
gwevinlover123
2008-10-24 . chapter 1
That was a really good story! It was sad but really really good. I love it. TT
Life.GetOne
2008-10-23 . chapter 1
That's the perfect backstory for him! I felt so bad for him when Vlad yelled at him.

Fantastic work and keep it up (along with the Gwevin. Me love G/K)!
koolkame
2008-10-23 . chapter 1
This is great! It connects everything in a believable manner and is awesome to boot. I really like how you got into Kevin's head in all the stages of his life so far and the quotes were a nice touch. Major props.
Chibi Hime
2008-10-21 . chapter 1
Wow.
Just a great fic all around.
But your fics are awesome ^_^

I loved the end. It took seven years for the severity to sink in, but he has the badge now and he did turn out okay. His mother is appropriately a doormat, which is the only other excuse, other than being dead, she has for not taking care of her son.
This was excellent. Is it a one shot or will you be continuing it?
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