omg omg omg omg

This is a really good story--It's almost a prologue to Giving, which I enjoyed as well. I really like your prose--please, do write more on Neopets. You do very well with the Eliv/Gilly pairing, and I'd like to read more of such a pairing.

Wow... spooky! It might be worth submitting to the Neopian Times... if it weren't for the fact that they might caonsider it just a little bit to dark for the younger members. LOVE IT!

Wow. Amazing work with Eliv Thade here.

A really great one-shot--it looks like it could be the prologue to the game itself! Your talent makes me jealous...:D Keep up the excellent work!