I really liked this, I was rooting for Martha but then again I'm always rooting for the underdog. Good one-shot.

This was actually really good! I would've liked to know more about Martha, but hey, what can you do in a oneshot one-chapter story? I liked the ending; it was very well written. the whole thign was very well written. I don't mean to be a douchebag, but there were a few typos and grammar problems in the first half (just a few!), but other than that (I am a grammar nazi, feel free to criticize my grammar or my story) this story was fantastic! You should definitely write more BR fanfiction. GOOD JOB!!

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Aww that was a pretty sad ending. I thought that each character was well created and very entertaining to read about. I was hoping Jessica would have won, but oh well lol. This was a really good one shot and it's defientely going into my favorites! I wonder what you'll write for the real deal ;)

Later days!!

That was... wow. Definitely unexpected. Props for the surprise ending.

Awesome story, the ending was really sad... I hope everything works out right for you! ^_^ I can't wait to read more from you!