UPDATE! I WANT THAT UPDATE!

shall i take it that the argyle in this story isn't the same argyle that is william's uncle?

Sorry I tried to read your story but could not focus on the words. If you could lose the underlining would be great. I will check this story out at a later date hopefully with some changes

oh

So is she actually gonna go to war

I hope so

Good chapter

A little short

But good non the less

I really enjoyed reading it

Hurry and update as soon as possible

aw

Poor Argyle, He tried and failed

Will they join William or not

that's what i want to know?

TDA

Update soon

Lol

He blushed

Great Chapter as always it was a pleasure to read

Update Soon and i'll be looking out for it

There is no other word to describe this but amazing

I loves reading it

Update soon, don't take so long like this one

I'll be looking out for it

oh the plot thickens

do i smell romance in the air

nah that's my dinner but still

lol

Nice but could do with being a bit longer the suspence is killing me

Woohoo

great chapter

i love the twist

a woman who can use a sword brill

Keep it up

LOL

I keep on saying this but it's getting better and better all the time

Update soon please

Getting better

Thank for not underlining and italics it was hard to read last time

The story line so far is good

Keep writing

Brill start

Really enjoyed reading it

Could make your chapters a bit longer though

Update soon

I can't wait to find out what happens next

Hi! Shame none of your other stories haven't any reviews. This story shows promise, just be careful not to stray your Own Character into the Mary Sue zone. It's also best not to underline and italicize the text because it's hard to read. Other than that, your punctuation and grammar are fine and the plot seems good. Maybe make the next chapter longer :)

Hope this helps and update soon.