 DarkAngelJudas 2009-10-06 . chapter 12Yay!! A happy ending, I can so kiss you right now!!*chu* They're free, and safe and Jizabel and Cassian have no worries.*woot* |
 Savvi-Sin 2009-10-05 . chapter 12*flails and cries* Sorryll that was so perfect! GAH!
I was having a super bad day and reading this made me all warm and fuzzy inside! The whole story was so good an amazingly written damn you have talent girl...me, I can only dream...but amazing superb AMAZING work as usual
I saw this really scary picture and spent the night clutching vol 5 of Godchild to my chest last night. Random event. Now go work on Desire =D |
 SunilaMoon 2009-10-05 . chapter 12The god level of awesome that this fic possesses makes me feel small and insignificant.
Sorryll, hon, I told a friend of mine once to read this because it is "The holy grail of CassianxJizabel fics" and it really is.
You wrapped this up so beautifully, I mean, you don't see fanfiction this good, my own work included.
(Seriously, I dunno what I'm doing with Broken Home, since it feels like I took such a cheep fangirl shortcut with it...)
Fantastical is the best word for this. XD
And, my god, a happy, adorable, and well handled ending. THEY'RE POSSIBLE. YAY. |
 Poison_Black13 2009-10-05 . chapter 12 I'm like freaking crying over here! that was awesome! i loved it! |
 Ralice Goith72 2009-09-29 . chapter 11OMFG! This is so cute! I wis i was that good of a writter. |
 morbidbirdy 2009-07-19 . chapter 11 I'M A LUKER AND I'VE SAID HI MANY A TIMES! lol aw this chapter made me cry AGAIN! it made me happy to see that you finally updated cause i've been kept away from my puter. I LOVE YOUR STORIES! they never fail to make me cry. |
 Lyless and Lockesilver 2009-07-18 . chapter 11GAH! *hides* I'm sorry for lurking!!
This was such an amazing chapter, all the emotion and tension, you had me worried for a bit. At the end I realized I was actually holding my breath. ^-^
Fantastic as always. |
 Shadow Hylian 2009-07-17 . chapter 11Okay, I've been reading this story for a while, but not yet reviewed. *Is shamed*
I really love this fic and think that you're doing an incredible job of capturing the dynamic between Cassian and Jizabel, which also happens to be my favourite Godchild pairing ^_^
The way that Cassian was protrayed in the early chapters and was guilt-ridden and gripped by the fear that he was not in control of his own body was written very well, and I think that the portrayal of Jizabel and his troubled past was also handled very well.
As the story progress, I really liked the way that the story was unfolding, and just as the reader expects them to get their somewhat happy ending, another plot twist begins.
As for this chapter, I liked the way in which Jizable is just trying to carry on as usual, as if nothing has happened at all, and it was interesting to see him finally stand up to Alexis. I liked how this sequence played out and felt that the characters remained true to themselves.
The farmer being sympathetic to Cassian's plight was also a nice touch. I wasn't expecting him to be understanding, so I liked that part.
The ending to this chapter was also really nice.
Update soon! ^_^ |
 SunilaMoon 2009-07-11 . chapter 11My god...
That was intense, I was sort of freaking out there.
And I hyperventilated when I got the update in my inbox, couldn't wait to read it.
Alexis really produced that unbridled RAGEing, but in a good way, you know, you handled that well. But Jizabel... D;
Bringing back a little repeat of the "It's a joke, Moon" was brilliant, I got a chill and then panicked a little.
If there's any small thing I could say against it, is how... I dunno, directly involved Owl is being, but whatever, it was still great. And I love your Zenopia very much.
...EH, get the last chapter up soon, augh. D; |
 Savvi-Sin 2009-07-11 . chapter 11Oh my god.
Sorryll...I'm frickin' shaking in some sort of rage/saddness/pain/happiness. This was beautiful. Oh yeah, and not to mention that I'm crying now...Amazing as usual. I got really angry when at first Jizabel was telling Zenopia that Cassian had taken him against his will and stuff. Seriously amazing. I loved it *smiles* ^ ^ |
 sleepysmiles 2009-06-10 . chapter 1 I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH EVEN IF IM MORE OF A CAIN AND RIFF GAL I STILL LOVE IT! |
 Savvi-Sin 2009-05-19 . chapter 10Seriously. You're like my half-sister or something! (Well except I don't want to kill you like in Godchild...yeah, you get the reference) BEAUTIFUL! I was like crying at the end. I couldn't find the songs and lyrics that were in the story but I was listening to "Porcelain" by David Cook and "Breath" by Breaking Benjamin which also seemed to match nicely.
I love how you portray Cassian too! Do you like The young looking Cassian or the Cassandra looking Cassian? I like the younger one, but I forget that he's like 35...
Amazing work as per usual and don't be surprised if I show up at your doorstep someday and am like "Hello! I'm Savvi. I love Godchild. Yup" |
 DarkAngelJudas 2009-05-18 . chapter 10 This is so NOT fair, Jizabel deserves happiness, not this.*cries* |
 SunilaMoon 2009-05-17 . chapter 10Ah... I... That...
Why did the happiness go away so severely. *stands there slack jawed*
I tip my hat to how much angst you poured in. I was looking forward to angst but... I feel depressed now. D;
...Have I ever told you how much I love you? xDD
Poor Jizabel is just so messed up still... Silly, dangerous, heartbreaking, little thing that he is...
Gah, So how's Cassian going to handle this? Not that I expect an answer. I'm patient when it comes to these updates... Yessir... Patient I am...
*clings to your leg again*
Oh god, you and your horrible cliffhangers. D;
And just two more chapters? ...We're both at the same chapter count to the end! Lambio and Broken Home seem to be winding down around the same time...
At least I still have your other fics to look forward to when this is over. Everything I'm working on feels like such... total fluffyness in comparison to the stuff you've been posting lately. |
 DarkAngelJudas 2009-04-13 . chapter 9Ack, KAWAII!!*squeals* That was so sweet and tender, I loved it.*sighs happily* But I wished Jizabel heard what Cassian said, but oh well there's always next time.*smiles* |