|Reviews for Raindrops on the Windows|
| Feather Dancer 2/3/09 . chapter 3
Your not like Cliff McNish, because everyone write different, but you are very talented! I liked this! Only poroblem was lack of conversation! But otherwise it was beautiuflly writen!
You need to do something to do with Jess's dreams! They're so vivid, maybe she will see something that has happened or will happen or is happening while she sleeps! Somehow you need to connect it to her dad, (like the lost at sea idea by the way!) Um...
If you like I will brain storm some more and send you an email with some ideas that might help. Only if you want me too though. If not then I hope I have helped now!