I must say I did not see peters reaction too nikis death it seemed a little cold i mean 5 years had too be a bigger bond but alas you are god in this universe your word is law not the best chapter but ok none the less

I guess the saying how can something so wrong feel so write keep it up

the break out was so in depth it was simple to picture

the way you add peoples pov is very impressive

brutal I love keep it up

Love the chapter.

Love the "deleted" scene between Claire and Melody. And the "20 Things I hate about You referance" not quite how I imagine their converstion to be but I stil love it. And the sex scene was just hot.

amen to the tem talking

maria

Matthew is I. I somehow was not logged in.

Kilter is a noun that means order.

It's of unknown origin, but it means order.

great, more soon

Oh, how I hate cliffhangers...:)

This story is absolutely fantastic! The scene in the bathroom was H-O-T! Many more of those to come, hopefully...Peter needs to get over himself...dark, angry Peter GR. So self sacraficing. Just jump his bones Claire and THEN go give Nathan some what for. I love your writing,especially the way you write Claire; powerful, levelheaded and stong yet so vulnerable. Thanks so much for sharing your talents. Can'y wait for more.

Great chapter!

OMG I can't wait to read what happens next! ]

UPDATE SOON!

Interesting chapt.

I can't wait to see how Peter's and Claire's talk turns out. Update ASAP

This chapter was this : close to make me cry. poor poor claire what's gonna happen next? PPS!