 Owl Emporium 2009-10-22 . chapter 1Aw, Detty cuteness galore! (: Great job. |
 clare 2009-10-05 . chapter 1 wow, i really liked this story it was very gripping, but because i wanted more, when it came to the end i was like 'what, omg' is there any chance you could do a sequal of sorts or even a few chapters to satisfy my needs as an ugly betty fanatic/reader. :) |
 MeredithandDerekfanforever 2009-05-22 . chapter 1This is such a sweet fic. I loved it.
Brandy |
 Babycobweb 2008-11-15 . chapter 1That was so cute!
I loved every bit of it. Keep up the good work! (: |
 fish 2008-11-06 . chapter 1 that was really cute!! and loved the scene descriptions! |
 LadyShard 2008-10-27 . chapter 1Wow seriously just wow :) |
 Simkey 2008-10-24 . chapter 1This was SUCH a cute fan fiction. Thanks so much for writing it! |
 bellex 2008-10-23 . chapter 1aw that was really cute.
loved it! |
 Lutherian 2008-10-23 . chapter 1AW. |
 TeeFly 2008-10-23 . chapter 1Okay seriously one of my favorite UB one-shots EVER!
Totally love it...:D |
 didi6 2008-10-23 . chapter 1Great storie, whrite soon! |
 flaviaperoba 2008-10-23 . chapter 1oh,
i loved it.
one of my favorites one shot, no doubt about it.
so cute.
as a detty fan, and recently descovered hoyt fan i would ask you to write more detty's great fanfics like this... |
 Goshikku Seirei 2008-10-23 . chapter 1Hey!! Take the lines off under the text. Please? Because it was really distracting, considering it was a nice one shot all in all. I found the antenna head thing quite adorable and sweet. (: And Betty's metal free-smile worth celebrating for even more heart-warming. THank you!! It would be nice to read more Detty fics from you. We should keep the pairing alive and kicking! Good job!! |
 Historianic 2008-10-23 . chapter 1Oh WOW! I'm speechless, and happy and awe-inspired and just...WOW. This was BRILLIANT! You just have the most incredible knack for capturing the emotional heart of the characters; of the Detty dynamic and your fic is masterful in its creation. And I loved that clever throwback to Daniel's previous humiliation on the talk show and the way you reworked it. Fantastic stuff. This entire fic took us through so many places emotionally as Betty and Daniel go to those places. But really, this is a wonderful piece of work and has been an absolute joy to read! Totally made my day :D I hope you write more Detty fics soon! Thanks so much for sharing this with all of us. It's a real triumph.
PS Just one small suggestion. Maybe don't underline all the text. If you're looking to make a differentiation, rather use italics. It's easier on the eye and consequently more readable. After all, we don't want anything detracting from the brilliance of your work. |
 LunaSolTierra 2008-10-23 . chapter 1Beautiful and absolutely brilliant. |