I think it need a feqw more chapter it would be a neat story

I agree entirely with Bella...plus loved the line about "diet of a mosquito"...an enormous, prehistoric, dinosaur mosquito more likely.

Wow. I NEVER knew that worried!Edward could be so hot! You're probably getting sick of my reviews by now, but I can't help it. Your stories are great!

You write some very nice emotional smut, Amethyst. ;)

Merci beaucoup!

This fic was insatiable! :)

Oh, hell yeah! Is there anything sexier than Edward losing control?

"a normal girl would have been turned off by her boyfriend having the same diet as a mosquito"

Ha! I've never heard the comparison made like that before.

... I've got no words, this is just to sweet in its own masochistic way. XD

Woah that was intense LOL.

I thought he was gonna bloody break her any minute then LOL!

Amazinng :P

Edward shook his head at me, smiling now. “I’ll never understand you, will I? A normal girl would be crying right now.”

“Edward, a normal girl would have been turned off by her boyfriend having the same diet as a mosquito,” I said dryly.

Hah! Love it.

I love it! you are a fantastic writer. I love your dark Edward.

lol awsome rele rele good ]

lol i loe it wen edward ges crazy! good job blla. i give props!

aw, that was really sweet! i was so cute how worried Edward was for Bella's safety and it was certainly beneficial for Bella by the way he reacted :D

I love the diet of a mosquito line.

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