Hmm... fits with the series too well. Do you by any chance happen to personally talk with the creators of lain? I mean, come on, in five minutes, that's quite some talent. Sure, I can think of stuff really interesting in minutes, but this is pretty fast thinking compared to me. Good job. It pretty much fits with the lines of the explainations behind Serial Experiments: lain. Yes, there is an explaination behind the series, and it all makes sense. What doesn't make sense? E-mail me with questions.

A freaky little thought-sequence to go with a freaky little anime series.

Very good job portraying the broken thoughts...wow. I mean, this sent a shiver down my spine. Every time I read "I am not Lain." I cringed. That's how much this affected me. Excellent piece of writing.

That was neat.. I've never read anything of yours before, but I'm a fan now, thanks to that.

Lain broke my head. I think. I don't know. There is no head. There is no spoon. (wai..) Bah. You go ahead and do that, that thing where it just fits with the orignal flavor ... so! Does that mean you broke my head as well? Good question ...

wow! this was really amazing! i really liked how it was in the same tone and deepness of the show...really great story...keep up the awesome work!_

Wow. That was really good.

Man.. If you can do this in 5 minutes, God knows how good your fic would be if you'd put all your effort into it... It fits the theme of Lain very well. Uncomplete, no beginning no end... Great job!

...Spooky fruit.. I loved it. It was pretty eerie and really gave off a sense of how Lain really felt at times.