Why would you crawl in a hole? Unless it is to write a sequel or something. I liked it! There were a few grammar mistakes but it was still delicious.

I adored this story! Can you write more of it? Not dramatic, just an epilogue type thing with more yaoi interaction? It would be really cool if you did.

Oh.My! That just has to be one of the hottest RoyEd fics I've ever read! Absolutely lovely - in a HOT, sexy way - and I espcially liked the college setting. AU's in FMA are too few... I'd be interesting if you continue it, but it's wonderful as it is ^_^ Very nice indeed!

~Sunday

this is good why not continue it

WOW!!

but... but... itsnot anything more there?
Why? dont crawl into a hole your write is WOW!. =P ^_^ i hope you write more.. after you come out to the hole =).

damn! don't you dare crawl into a hole! pick up your pen and write some more! i LOVE this story!

a-ma-zing. e so good. i love the dance part.

Haha! Genius! >< Bloody genius! >< Man i could not help crying at that, lmfao! Literally! i was laughing so much i started to tear up! You, my fellow yaoi-fan, are amazing. I loved it. Loved it man. T.T i mean...sure...it makes me realize how utterly lonely i am, lol, but it was awesome. Thank you so much.

>w< Oh my God, this story was fucking amazing

haha! awsome !
you described roy mustang perfectly ! is hott !
ans so was...the tree house XD or rather what happened in the tree house haha!
anywho nicely written :D

omg! WOW! I loved this story!
-Drags out of hole- Never stop writing! You'll make me sad if you do D:

Great story

xx

wow. really good job on this. Love how you conveyed so much in a somewhat short story, and was written beautifully. and for some reason i like that there wasnt a terrible amount of dialogue, you did a great job at writting it so the excessive talking wasnt all that necessary. Its also nice that it seems like you get a 'backstory' from the fic without having to actually write chapter upon chapter to form the in depth relationships and 'emotions' i guess between them. anyway, love the fic and hopefully everyones good reviews will be enough coaxing and motivation to continue? (please??)

a, this fics is too good to be left here, maka some chapters please?

You're a good author(ess, I'm assuming?) and I hope you continue writing stuff like this.
I laughed out loud at the end-
“I’ll suck you off if you agree to be the maid. I’ll pay you...”
“Give it a goddamn manlier name and get going.”
XD
Keep writing!

Nice and hot!