Holy crap, this was... amazing. There are no other words to describe it. I am incredibly impressed with your writing skills, and the story

I definitely cried. First, it hit pretty close to home - gay rights are very dear to me. I've seen several friends go through a lot because they're gay, (not to that degree, but still) and I'm dreading the day that I'll have to deal with it. So I understand the frustration and fear.
Second, it was just damn heartbreaking that Albus (and friends and family) had to go through that.

Absolutely amazing story.

:) Keep up the brilliant writing!

“Now, let's go bother Snape.” I just had to comment on this- have you ever seen the two original Potter Puppet Pals animations? If not you should, and then you'll understand why I'm mentioning them here :)
"The Gaily Gay Gummies even turn you rainbow coloured when you eat them" Hahaha love it :)

I enjoyed reading this story; it was a very powerful piece of writing.

This is an amazing story. I love the character portrayal, and honestly if you were to sell this under JKRs name, i don't think anyone would be able to tell the difference. Keep writing, you have amazing potential.

I've read a good few of your stories, and I found that I very much enjoyed your writing. Over the past week I've been devouring AS/S fics and I found a treasure-trove of them on your profile. So I started reading this story knowing that you are a good author. This story was great, from the fluff to the torture and everything in between. It takes a good author to write a believable villain, but it takes a truly inspiring writer to make that villain human. It's beyond easy to hate the bad guy, but it takes a real writer to be able to see all facets of a character and show their reasoning. It's my belief that everyone has a reason for doing what they do, even if it's a bad reason or a reason that we don't agree with. What you did with Goyle is something that I don't find very often on FFnet, and I'm really glad to have read this fic. I think I've mini-ranted enough and now I'll go and read some more of your stories.

great story, very touching
Question: where did your inpisation for this story come from?
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Adorable!! It was a little predictable, what with Goyle being gay, but that's fine. It still worked very well. I loved the part at the wedding with Lily being the one we thought through. I'd never seen Charlie and Neville together, but I liked it alot! I'm glad we don't still have those laws in America. Little droplet of faith in the human species. :)

Your writing is really good; the flow is pretty flawless and it was really easy to understand without being simple and boring. It might've been cool to mention that the first Albus (Dumbledore) was gay too. Could've been cool. I also loved how we got to see the families at the wedding. Great job!

This is a really cool story! I like how it's formatted too, with 4 parts instead of typical chapters.

I like how Draco is the family guy, but still retains his pride and charector. I liked the line about getting involved with a meglomaniac when you're 16 can put you on every suspect list for the next 30 years. It was just really honest and true how you put words to how these kids shouldn't be seen as being full adults, because they aren't.

I found a little plot-hole though, when Higgs is kidnapping Albus he says something about Draco to Scorpius. I think that Scorpius would've remembered that and told the Weasleys and the Potters.
Another thing, although I like how they aren't adults and you have them not being impossibly hardcore like their parents, I would like to see a bit more maturity from both of the boys.

Great story so far! You've got me reading into the early morning!
-FlameintheFlood-

this was a sweet story.. thanks bunches!

A wonderful story. Heartbreaking in places, funny and sweet in others. It made me laugh, it made me angry and sad. Well done. Marvellous job.

First of all: A very nice idea and a … *searches word* Fruition? Realization? Achievement? Damn it… xD It’s a shame that homosexuals are not allowed to so many things… like marriages or so and I worship that Albus is standing up for more sexual equality.
So… I began reading this story and was sucked in immediately. I couldn’t stop reading, but it’s so… long xD and I’ve been reading it for a couple of days in school. *cough*
Albus… I really like this Albus. He’s very Slytherin but also very, very adorable. I enjoyed his enthusiasms at the beginning and hope he’ll be able to get over his kidnapping.

Scorpius is so incredible sweet! I don’t exactly know why, but I wanted to give him a hug most of the time. As Draco sat in prison…
…“That’s hardly a good reason. Greg and Vince were my best friends, and I didn’t marry them.”
Grimacing, Scorpius groaned. “Honestly, Dad, I did not need the mental image of you in a threesome.”
Draco blanched. “That is not what I meant!”…
xD I laughed so hardly, my teacher thought I cried… First I was a bit down, because Draco seemed to be the bad-boy again, and I love him so much that I couldn’t have take this.
And it was so emotional! I nearly cried a couple of times, which would have been very embarrassing in public… The whole thing with Greg’s background story, the resolution in the end. That’s also one of my favs.

Sev-Sev was in here too! I could kiss you for that. I absolutely love the idea of him threatening the people in Hogsmeade with… howls. xD You know what I mean. And Percy… I think I’m one of the few people who like Percy xD but all the more I love his appearance and his changes. I liked Topaz, too. xD

I just… Oh, I cannot express in English how much I love your story. But I do. I would marry it, if that would be allowed. ;)
You did a fantastic job!

Oh it was so god! I'm so proud of Albus! And I like that you put Severus in here as well, it fits! Draco as a lawyer...that suits him

great story
did Charlie lose his job as well