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mthgirl 2008-10-25 . chapter 1
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hard to understand but pretty good
my name is paper YAH 2008-10-24 . chapter 1
uh. O.o
poisonflower 2008-10-23 . chapter 1
well.. that was a little odd.. nice change though.. I mean poeple always make it so she does nothing wrong... but I do like those too.. good job. you did make him alittle needy but not to bad i don't think... alot of emotion I agree
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