The chapters are on the shorter side, but it's still a good read. I realy want to see his past now.

Keep writing,
Jinx Author

Great chapters. Keep up the great work.

I am really liking this story so far. It's nice to see a symbiote where the only thing on its mind isn't killing stuff. Keep writing.

Jinx Author

Interesing idea. Keep up the good work.

UPDATE. O=

The concept of this story is totally awesome. A human who has been transformed into a, hopefully, good symbiote! Wow! I hope that nothing bad happens to him. I do wonder, though: from whom was he made? Venom? Carnage? Both hate Spider-Man with a passion, so it could be either one! Oh! Please update this story soon!

Slight nitpicks:

1. On all chapters, the title seems to be repeated twice.
2. There is a large text block at the start of chapter three that could be paragraphed.

Other than that, an excellent story.