 Dice135 4/18/10 . chapter 16loved the story r u riting a sequel |
 QueenOfWeird1995 6/17/09 . chapter 16that was a beautiful story, though i wish there could have been a way for them in the end... |
 Rebecca 4/9/09 . chapter 16 Great story! I enjoyed reading a different interpretation of the original series... Very sad ending, though the imagery was wonderful. |
 Tailz the Great 1/29/09 . chapter 16Aww! That was so emotional! I actually teared up at the end. Knowing that they never would be and that this was the end of them really hurt my heart. What a story! I chose it at random thinking it would be a light read but it turned out to be so much more. Your story was simply beautiful.
The only thing I can say against it is that I feel there could have been more detail. I know the 6th book gives us a lot of detail but I would have liked to see a bit more in your story. Otherwise, you did a wonderful job. You certainly deserve more reviews than you got. I hope more people read your story in the future and are touched by the forbidden love of the lioness and the dragon. Please, keep writing (not just this story but others).
Peace,
Tails |
 little-miss-evilness 1/9/09 . chapter 16Aw that is a sweet ending...is there a sequal?luv it luv LME! |
 little-miss-evilness 1/8/09 . chapter 8OMG luv it luv LME! ps: cant wait to read more |
 Umbridgeskitty 1/6/09 . chapter 16Oh please don't let this be the end of your fic! I want to see them finally face each other and what happens.
this was such a sad chapter, to see Hermione's realisation that they would have to face each other as enemies is heartbreaking.
Sorry but I am such a sucker for a happy ending. |
 Umbridgeskitty 1/6/09 . chapter 15I love that you have made Narcissa the loving parent. I like to think of her that way in the books as well as Fandom. I like to think that she would be the one to try and curb Lucius' cruellness towards his son. |
 Umbridgeskitty 1/6/09 . chapter 13I was wondering when Henry would put in an appearance. A very interesting twist with the Malfoys. And I'm sure I can guess who this 'poor kid' is. Can't wait until Hermione and him meet up. |
 Umbridgeskitty 1/6/09 . chapter 12I got goosebumps reading this chapter. Because you have kept it so close to Canon makes seem even more 'real(well as real as a work of fiction can be) |
 Umbridgeskitty 1/6/09 . chapter 11Such a heartbreaking chapter. Surely they both have to get through this. I really am hoping for a happy ending. LOL |
 Umbridgeskitty 1/6/09 . chapter 9I was saving reviewing until I had caught up on reading the remaining chapters but I had to tell you how much I loved this chapter.
I totally get why they feel attracted to each other and their confusion as well. And I'm glad her eyes are back to their normal colour, I don't like it when she changes physically on a permanent basis. |
 helenluvsboo 1/2/09 . chapter 9That last speech of hers echos Rose Tyler from the new series of BBC's family-friendly science-fiction television show Doctor Who. |
 Umbridgeskitty 11/17/08 . chapter 3Interesting. Can't wait to find out more about Henry and what happens when Malfoy won't get out of Hermione's way. |
 Umbridgeskitty 10/27/08 . chapter 2I think I'm going to enjoy this one. Update soon please. |