gerat story and i love it

I loved this work!

I am very pleased to have you writing in this fandom, especially considering you are my FAVORITE TMNT writer!

HUgs!

hi there. i just read your story..beautiful. at first when i was watching the series, and i never saw the whole of it, i was a bit ticked..i mean HELLO..Dar is a BLOND lol, plus he is older. then i realized okeeday they are probably doing a backstory/prequel thingy. whatev..hey i have an idea for you if really want to write some interesting stuff..write a future sorta fic...ya know..in the movie arc..where maybe he reunites with Jackie and they fall in love, etc. maybe she goes back to his world or he stays in hers..it seems in the series..he saved his family, but in the movies, he just had to save his people..his world..time for a lil settling down, eh. good luck to ya :) stay safe and warm.