oh I like this. River normally annoys the heck out of me. I like that she is trying to get the doctor and rose together. good idea.

A well-written depiction of what changing time can be. 10 out of 10 stars

OH MY GOD THANK YOU! THANK YOU SO MUCH!

This did something I didn't think was possible - it made me like River Song. And apart from that, the description was absolutely beautiful. It gave me tingles.

Awesome!

Aw...wow.

Interesting idea and very well written... Of course, I don't really want to consider the paradoxical premise too carefully. Thanks for posting.

Nothing like a nice, little... okay, giant, gaping paradox to make the universe a happier place :)

Ooh, wow.

I wasn't expecting that ending at all...

It makes me feel better, all fluffy and nice.

Brilliantly done.

-Oncoming

great story, and extra yay for happy ending, especially if it takes river song out of the picture