Wow! Intense. You really pulled off the second-person narrative (which is no easy task) and I loved the subtle things you put into it that made it just super dark and creepy.

That was lovely dark fic.

I think I liked that more than I should have...:D

Aw. Wow. Hot. I like it! Its weird and kinda creepy and not fluffy at all. Yay. If Claquesous wasn't weird and creepy and stuff he just wouldn't be Claquesous. I'm guessing there won't be another part? But hey, I thought Mizzies on a plane was just a cute thing that ended at the end of part one so I dunno. But yeah. I really really like it. It appeals to my weird side that's really attracted to assholes. Well done! =]]