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Hope and love
2009-11-14 . chapter 5
i love it! update soon!
HRHLadyEsme
2008-12-11 . chapter 5
I'm such a slacker, I finally read all the chapters and I do love it. Very nice story my dear!!
Rin07
2008-11-25 . chapter 5
This is really good! I love Carlisle/OC (I'm assuming that's where this is going lol) and I am addicted to Outlander! I just finished reading it and have to run out and get a copy of Dragonfly in Amber. Keep up the great work and can't wait for more!
melmel05
2008-11-21 . chapter 5
i think this is a cool story. definitely worth continuing to read. update soon!! :)
none-of-that
2008-11-11 . chapter 5
Ah! I have been looking for a good CarlisleOC for like ever!

Do not get me wrong, I love Esme and all, but really, she's a tad boring for Carlisle. They make a great couple if anything. But they do not complement each other too well.

So yeah! Amanda is a lovely girl! Ah! So NOT boring. I can't wait for next chapter!
knoukoy
2008-11-04 . chapter 5
Wohoo
nice, nice, nice
I like how she meets all these important people and I like the idea of her being a doktor or a nurse. :)
I'm already waiting for the next chapter, I like where your going with this
pleas update soon!
knoukoy
Mizra
2008-11-04 . chapter 5
I read this earlier but was at work. I have to act like I'm doing SOMETHING, you know. ;)

I like where you are going with this and I am as befuddled as Amanda about the key and locked box. What could possibly be in there? Does it have something to do with Edward? Elizabeth? Henry Hart? (He reminds me of looking like Emmett. I think it's the Henry reference.)

Good job, great work and I can't wait to hear more from you!
Fanpire123
2008-11-04 . chapter 5
YAY! that was great! can't wait for more! ^_^
Valerie0329
2008-11-04 . chapter 5
Its amazing the things we take for granted in our time. I loved the bit about the underwear, I burst out laughing. I am glad this isn't predictable at all, I am curious as to where it is going, and I really want to know whats in that deposit box. I like the style so far hope you update again soon.

Valerie
knoukoy
2008-10-27 . chapter 4
Hey
I wasn't able to review yesterday, but here I am :D
I really enjoyed reading your story so far. I've always dreamed of going back in time some day, so it's a plessure to see someone who shares this dream, and ofcourse where this comes true!
I like the way you worked Elizabeth (and Edward) into the story. I think it's cool to get to know her. :)
please continue writing and update soon please
knoukoy
Mizra
2008-10-26 . chapter 4
Wow! I like where this is going very much. Stories set later in the times (such as the early 1900s) are some of my favorites. And, strangely enough, this story is beginning to remind me of the Christopher Reeve's movie 'Somewhere In Time'. Ever seen it? Definitely a good one to watch. It might even give you inspiration with this!

Oh, and I am VERY interested in hearing how Mrs. Masen gets her foolhardy son Edward back to his home for his birthday. :) Nice touch!
Fanpire123
2008-10-24 . chapter 4
MORE! I want to see edward! and this is just an awesome story and I'm sure I'l love where you're taking this! :D update soon!
Valerie0329
2008-10-24 . chapter 4
Hm I'm really interested to see where you go with this story. Especially to see your interpretation of our beautiful Edward as a human. I love that it isn't predictable yet, and that you didn't just throw everything out there the first chapter. You gave me a chance to get to know the characters and become involved in the story on its own without the Twilight influence. I am looking forward to where you go with the story because I love your other stories. Hope you update again soon.
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