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SweetestSong23 7/5/11 . chapter 1
Lance said he was going to rock something, didn't he? Thank you for that little pinch of Kurty, one of my favorite pairings, second only to AleX23! Your thoughts?

X23: Kurty? AleX23? What are you talking about, Athena*?

Alex[blushing until his face is as red as his hand-beams] Um, Laura**?

X23/Laura: Yes, Alex? Why is your face red?

Alex: Uh... Umm... [blushes red as Scott's glasses
Athena: Laura? [Laura looks at Athena] You REALLY need to read some AleX23 stories. You will be surprised at what you hear...

X23/Laura: Hmm... AleX23 kind of sounds like 'Alex' and 'X23' put together... And Kurty kind of sounds like Kurt mixed with something...

Athena: Laura?

X23/Laura[turns to face Athena] Hmm?

Athena[hands Laura a computer with a screen of completed Kurty stories] Pick a story.

X23/Laura: Umm... [thinks for a moment, but then points to a story called 'Into The Woods' by FrankAndJoe3
Athena: Hmm... Probably not the best chioce for a first-timer... But, hey, who cares? Just so you know, this story isn't real, just a story by a kid around our age. Don't go around spreading rumors about what happened in this story, OK?

X23/Laura: What makes you think I'll spread rumors?

Athena: Just read.

X23/Laura: OK. [Reads story[eys go wide] That's not really true about Kurt's past, right? It's not true, is it?

Athena: Well, some parts are, some parts are pure fantasy. He was raised in Germany, and was in the circus, but the thing about Stefanand Jimaine isn't true. [mumbles] At least I don't think so...

X23/Laura: Alright... What about AleX23?

Athena[Presses the mouse button and scrolls down a few times. end up pressing a link leading to 'You're Still Stupid'by Couver] OK, Laura, now read this story.

X23/Laura: OK. [Reads[Blushes redder than Jean's hair] What. Was. That?

Athena: That. Was. AleX23!

Alex[blushes redder than Laura did] Umm...

X23/Laura: Alex, if that really happens, you will be dead. Do you understand?

Alex: Uh huh... [kisses Laura on the cheek and runs away before she could react
X23/Laura: ALE! YOU ARE SOOO DEAD!*Athena is my name for FF.n*Laura is X23's name.

You have a great story. That was awesome! Sorry for my review being so long. I don't usually make them so long. That was a funny story, just like all of the stories by you!
Swirl-spill 8/16/10 . chapter 1
Scott smartening up?...HAHAHAHAHAHA! GOOD ONE! YEAH! As if that would ever happen!*wipes away a tear
Oh, that was a great joke, Red.
Ace-of-Cyberspace13 8/7/10 . chapter 1
Poor Lance!-Ace
dogbertcarroll 8/17/04 . chapter 1
Question: What is it with all these Spyke
episodes anyway?
Answer: Spyke is a Pochy. He is a character made
to fit a target demographic. Unfortunately they
didn't yank him like Pochy.
WormmonABC 6/27/03 . chapter 1
Tartar sauce... m.
God of Death's Little Angel 3/23/02 . chapter 1
It is always a pleasure to read your fics, they always make me laugh. Poor Lancey! Oh well hehehhe made me laugh a WHOLE bunch, good job! Peace
Sprocket 12/29/01 . chapter 1
ROFL! This was sooo funny! Good job!*Katie*
Katterree Fengari 12/5/01 . chapter 1
_ I like! more? _ pls! Tarter!
Prettyflower 11/22/01 . chapter 1
Woohoo! MAJOR LOL!I wish I saw more fics this kind of funny out there. I luv brotherhood ics, don't you? I'm writing my own, in fact, i think, it's all screwed up tho...
Sphinx 11/22/01 . chapter 1
Hahahahaha! That was so funny! I love all your Evo fics, I've read all of them (I'm a loser with no life, so it works). But you know what the best part about your Evo fics is? That they could actually happen. I mean, it's not like you create all new episodes. Like, for example, this fic slides quite nicely into the episode "African Storm". All your other Evolution fics do the same thing. That's the mark of a great fanfic author. Please don't stop writing!
N.L. Rummi 11/22/01 . chapter 1
OMG! That is *so* funny! Terrific job! (I loved your phone series, too!)
arin 11/21/01 . chapter 1
That was so cool! Where do you come up with this stuff? More please!
Jaid Skywalker 11/21/01 . chapter 1
LOL. This was great; I love stories like this. Tabby and Kitty in a cat fight. I can just picture it _ Poor Lance. You're making me like him now.
lotus blossom 11/20/01 . chapter 1
like it! really cute.
TC Starwind 11/20/01 . chapter 1
::Snickers quietly Poor Lancy.:Goz to hide before something is thrown at her Nice story.
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