Very cute, I really enjoyed it.

Ah so SWEET!

I especially liked this sentence: Silky brown with chocolate eyes (buttons),
And then the buttons part hehe,

a so sweet!

Heh heh heh...Malcolm's not the most subtle of people, is he? Then again, Inara's probably got all kinds of training in body language reading and such to work off of
Though I have to say...good on ya, Mal! Finally taking the chance but starting on the right foot: small enough to not cause waves but significant enough to mean something to Inara :D

Ah. Geez, that's cute. Mal and a teddy. Inara would so leave him to it, as well. For some reason I imagined the fur was purple...

Now *that* is really sweet. I'd love to see you write longer stories than just the normal pieces you upload I think they would be shiny.

aw! so cute! i love it. adorable lol! :X