 pronker 2009-04-11 . chapter 1Ha, this was really good! I liked the up and down of Anakin's mood, so very realistic. I'm glad you posted. |
 Ducky'sgirl4ever 2009-03-04 . chapter 1A great story. Very good. |
 0Warrior0Maiden0 2008-10-28 . chapter 1That was great. So very very funny and totally Anakin.
I especially like the bit about the loose tiles.
I wish I was as good at making up stories as you are, I'm rubish at anything creative. All your stories are different and new and yet portray the characters well and are entertaining.
Keep up the good work. :-) |
 Banbi-V 2008-10-24 . chapter 1*giggles* I liked it and Obi-Wan wasn't out of character. :) |
 Leiathecrazyjeditimetraveler 2008-10-24 . chapter 1I don't think Obi-Wan is out of character the least bit (according to my world)> I guess it is because I think of this as being three years before the beginning of the Clone Wars (Anakin is nineteen then and headstrong as ever). Good writing. |