That was completely and utterly adorable. I loved it!

Absolutely wonderful! Hilarious and cute, this story gets a perfect grip of the character's personality. Seems just like the real thing.

Cute! It was totally sweet.

that was a good read. very interesting. looking forward to reading more of your writing (^^,).

*smiles in utter contentment* That was so sweet! Made my day! And I was wondering, since you added that at the end, if we could possibly hear about the custard one, and maybe see some examples of a personally illustrated one. If we can't, that's fine, but as soon as you mentioned those you made me really curious. *smiles*

Sweet ~ I smiled while reading it ♥

Hm, how adorable. ^^

That was cute, a very Kyoko way of ensuring that Ren isn't so depressed. You nailed the characters, once again! :)

Very adorable :)

I really enjoyed the exploration of the BJ character. You take characterisation very seriously.

I want to know what her "interesting commentary" on custard was but I'm guessing it was not good because Sho likes custard.

This was a Great and Funny Story!

I love your story. It's so cute, and in character too. I have to wonder though, why is it called, With My Little Eye?

Really sweet and well written! 10/10

Very nice. I can just see Kyoko scrambling around trying to get those notes into Ren's stuff. I also like how you took Ren's character into a darker mode because of the BJ role. I agree that he'd likey to be troubled by it and Kyoko would notice. Random notes are a great way to surprise and amuse people. It might have been nice if you'd mentioned the 'illustrations' in the story (her conversation with Yashiro) and not just the authors notes, but even then, it got an after the story smile from me, so if that was your goal you accomplished it well.

aww, it seems so sweet in the wierd way she tried to cheer him up. and i liked learning the random facts! (:
Ren must be SUPER Happy.

Awesome! Wow Ren is smart! Well, can't blame him since he is in love lol!

lol bananas...lol!